Thursday, September 22, 2016

Diamante Poem By Erin

WALT entertain the reader - Diamantes are diamond-shaped poems ‘that contrast’ `two nouns.
Success Criteria:
Step 1:  Think of two nouns that are complete opposite of each other.  Write one on Line 1 and the other on Line 7.
Step 2:  On Line 2, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 1.
Step 3:  On Line 3, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 1.
Step 4:  On Line 4, write a short phrase about line 1 and line 7.
Step 5:  On Line 5, write three “-ing” words (verbs) that relate to Line 7
Step 6:  On Line 6, write two adjectives that describe the noun on Line 7.
Step 7:  On Line 7 you will have your noun that you thought of in Step 1.


Winter
Frosty, bright
Skiing, snowball fighting, sledding
Icicles and snowflakes, family holidays
Swimming, suntanning, sweltering
Hot, sunny
Summer

Now have a go at writing your own diamante poem.  

Kittens
Fluffy, cuddly
Playing, meowing, scratching
Jumping on furniture,... peering all day
Barking, snoring, drooling
Cute, furry
Puppies

Friday, September 9, 2016

Cinquains



Purpose: to entertain
Success Criteria
  1. Subject
  2. 2 adjectives (describing words) to tell about the subject
  3. 3 verbs (interesting doing words) ending in ‘ing’ that also tell about the subject
  4. A phrase to tell about how the subject feels or what it does
  5. A word describing the first line or choose another adjective

Bulldogs
Cute, cuddly
Barking, waiting, drooling
Sad while he waits
Dog

Bulldog about to sleep

Thursday, March 24, 2016

The Camp I missed.


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Here is my best friend wearing those shoes  and the watermelon shorts with the leopard pants.   
These are the the water shoes that  they had to wear  because if they stand on a  sharp rock it will hurt them.
This is my friends box car and  they put a lot of effort into them.
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This is a very hard challenge to do.
Piper pulling a funny face it made me laugh.
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This is the front of Piper box car.
This is Piper on the kayaks